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Tutorial Comic Page 1 by DNA-1 Tutorial Comic Page 1 by DNA-1
CITY OF HEROES FREEDOM brings a new Free-to-Play option to the game, and given all the new players coming in to check us out, we doubled down on all aspects of the new starting experience. That includes a brand-new tutorial section that simultaneously teaches new heroes and villains how to interact with the world but also a new tutorial comic that plays out over a series of load screens.

This is page one, depicting the meteors' arriving on Earth, a harbinger of the long-teased "Coming Storm" storyline. The city's greatest heroes arrive on the scene.
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Axigan Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Professional General Artist
The only thing that I really don’t like are the speech balloons, they don’t make the art any justice.

It seems like they were quickly slapped in there in the last second while the art was carefully made.
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DNA-1 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Interesting. I'm not sure what more you're looking for in a speech balloon? :)
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Axigan Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Professional General Artist
I was quite disappointed to see terribly done balloons in the work I made for a Honey West comic from Moonstone, and even though my work wasn’t great the balloons made it look quite cheap.

It's something many people overlook, it might seem kind of dumb but well done speech balloons can give you a better connection with the actions or the mood we see in the art. I kind of felt disconnected in these pages because your art is so great but the words didn’t seem to come out from the characters and lost power and impact in the action scenes.

I’m not a letterer though, but I found a couple of seasoned letterers giving advices on their pages, it's quite an interesting read too.

I hope you didnt take this the wrong way (I tend to get people angry with things like this)
Here are the links if you are interested:
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T-babe Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
it's so beautiful. :0
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DNA-1 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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orabich Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Nice page!
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